1/23/2011

Lu-La

nalula ako...
sa taas ng gusali
dumungaw pababa
hawak ang pisi
...
bumagsak, lumagapak!

nalula ako...
sa taas ng gusali
ni walang hagdanan
hawak ko ang pisi
...
naputol, napigtal!

nalula ako...
sa taas ng gusali
may nakadungaw
may hawak ng pisi
...
bumabagsak, lalagapak

nalula ako...
sa taas ng gusali
kahit walang hagdan
nakalutang sa pisi
...
maputol man,o mapigtal!

nalula ako...
sa taas ng gusali
pinagmasdan ang sarili
na may hawak na pisi
...
pinagduktong,ibinuhol!


17 comments:

pamatayhomesick said...

alay ng isang OFW sa:
nakakalimot
nagtatago
sa lula ng
tagumpay?

Abou said...

matalinhaga...

:-)

sheng said...

Ang bagsak ay nakakasira ng buhay, kaya mag-ingat lagi! Hindi sa lahat ng oras ay nasa tuktok ka! Magaling, Ever! magaling ka talaga!

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Misalyn said...

Masyadong matalinhaga ang iyong tula Ever. Maganda at may malalim na mensahe. Galing talaga!....pintor na poet pa.

witsandnuts said...

Ang galing! Gentle reminder.:)

dong ho said...

lalim. galing! galing!

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asiong32 said...

ang lalim nga! pero astig!

Erick said...

medyo nalula ako as tula mo ah..
musta na? medyo matagal akong di napasyal dito. ;)

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MinnieRunner said...

Ako rin nalula :D